PESO - Factory Sale
miserere at gmail.com
Sat Oct 24 10:41:35 EDT 2009
Thanks for the comments, Guys, I knew I could count on you for some
honest opinions. The pic has been growing on me during this week, so
I've decided I'm keeping it :-)
2009/10/22 <Eactivist at aol.com>:
> What he said, the angle doesn't work for me. Straight on or close to it,
> probably would have worked, made it more abstract.
I admit it: I'm a diagonal junkie! Next time I come across a similar
scene, I'll experiment with straight as well as diagonal framings.
> Marnie I assume it's a newspaper/flyer that by virtue of rain has been
> paper mached to the concrete.
You are correct! Somebody mentioned the shadows looking strange; those
"shadows" are just water that's seeped from the paper onto the
concrete surrounding the newspaper page. It really helps create the
abstract nature of the scene.
Again, thanks guys!
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