PESO - Oak

[Brian Walters]

Hi Marnie

I like where your project is heading.  Some excellent work so far.

This one doesn't quite work compositionally for me.  I wonder if a horizontal format would have worked better.  I just had a bit of a play with it and prefer a horizontal crop with the lower edge being almost at the top of that centre telegraph pole.  This makes the tree a bit more prominent without detracting from the "human impact on the environment" theme.

Just a point of view.....


Cheers

Brian

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Brian Walters
Western Sydney Australia




Quoting Eactivist at aol.com:

> This is about the best angle I could get on  this. Brightness and
> Contrast 
> have been bumped up.
> 
> Still working on  it.
> 
> http://members.aol.com/eactivist/PAWS/pages/oak.htm
>

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