PESO - Oak

[frank theriault]

On 5/1/07, Eactivist at aol.com <Eactivist at aol.com> wrote:
> This is about the best angle I could get on  this. Brightness and Contrast
> have been bumped up.
>
> Still working on  it.
>
> http://members.aol.com/eactivist/PAWS/pages/oak.htm
>
> Comments  welcome.
>
> Marnie aka Doe


I know what you're trying to say (I think) however compositionally,
it's not as strong as the other ones I've seen - there seems a theme
of starkness that I sense in those ones that's completely missing here
- in fact it's the opposite in this case.

Certainly as far as the "content theme" this one works, but not the
"compositional theme", if you know what I mean (again, not so good at
the artspeak).

cheers,
frank


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