PESO - All In A Row

[Jack Davis]

Marnie,
Nicely seen! Like it.
Am going to pick a couple of knits, one of which you may not be able to
do anything about.
Not simply because it's often quoted as a compositional rule, but
because it gave me a slight negative nudge. The horizon is
uncomfortably close to mid image. I would definitely drop it.
The other is that the left border interferes with building. If you have
the option of allowing a slight bit more of the left side, might
consider it.

Jack



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> I was up last Saturday at Napa for a  non-photography reason. Very
> white sky 
> day, overcast and foggy and drizzly. I  prefer to keep my equipment
> dry, but 
> on the way out of town the rain stopped for  a while. So I pulled
> over down a 
> private road toward a vineyard and took some  shots. I didn't go any
> closer to 
> things because there were quite a few no  trespassing signs posted.
> The vines 
> themselves were all empty, no vines, just  posts waiting for vines.
> 
> I sort of liked this, however. I like how in  farm country you will
> see a 
> line of trees and it will not only be a line of  trees, but trees, a
> road, and 
> farm houses (and barns). I suppose in farm country  they do that to
> save 
> building on cultivable land -- to keep the land clear as  much as
> possible.
> 
> I wasn't sure this was worth it so I showed it to Bruce  Dayton
> first, and he 
> suggested I crop it like a pano and convert it to B&W,  and do a few
> other 
> things. Which I have done. Since it's a bigger file than I  show
> normally, it 
> may take a bit longer to load. I also didn't add any extra 
> sharpening because I 
> didn't feel it needed  it.
> 
> http://members.aol.com/eactivist/PAWS/pages/row.htm
> 
> Still not  sure if it is worth it, so I'd appreciate reactions. 
> 
> Technical  Info:  DS, A 35-105, 1/180, f/8, 400 ISO. 
> 
> I must admit it's fun to  be able now to throw up technical info. --
> this 
> photo is among the first group  of shots that I have shot with the DS
> (and the A 
> 35-105).
> 
> Marnie aka  Doe  :-)    
> 
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